Rough Cut 2 and Feedback

Feedback 1
I like the porcupine logo - can the text stay up for longer please? But is he a porcupine - looks more like a hedgehog!!
JustPhilm logo is a bit naff in comparison to porcupine!
I love the non-diegetic sound - very mysterious
Can you make the titles outlined as the white sometimes fades into the film
Is there a reason why you have the director title at the start? It is not conventional!
The title and name of person changes throughout the film opening - one time you may have:

Casting by
Mrs Willcox
Then the title will change to:
Mrs Willcox
Editor

Can you correct this please and stick with a house style.
Title placement is good
Titles should run all the way through
The gluing of the book takes a little too long
You need a screen at the end to show the film continues on - maybe a six months later or something, or a white screen even

Feedback 2
I like that there is no diegetic sound - it makes it really mysterious
It makes the audience want to know what's going which is really important in a Thriller
I really like the dark lighting when he's inside - it creates suspicion
The paint suddenly disappeared off his hand?
Rather than cutting to black on the title screen maybe have a smoother transition

By Olivia Calver and Samuel Skinner